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She sits there, behind the pane of glass, mocking me with her eyes. I can see her, through the words I write, even through these words, right now. Her long dark hair, her dusky skin, the brilliantly white teeth standing out from full, sensuous lips, and, finally, the deep wells of her eyes, endless depths concealed in the orange-brown iris.
Her lips form the words, almost as if she mirrors my thoughts; save me. I know that if I heed her, if I give in to my instincts, the world will be a different place; mere people, those ghosts I see around me every day, would be transient, flat, two-dimensional, while she would solidify, grow, become… something.
She reaches out to me, her fingers long and languid, but then she realises that there is a barrier between us; the glass that imprisons her, that keeps her in her box; no Schrödinger's cat this one, for she is observed, and her every mood is on display; capricious, playful, flirtatious, angry or frustrated, she wears them on her as if medals on a uniformed veteran, proud and tall. I see her every action and reaction through the windows that line the glass between us.
Her hands now are pressed up against the screen; Save me! She mouths it desperately, but I can't hear; deaf to her words, I blindly continue with my work. Filling the space between us with endless writing, building a world for us to live in, for us to travel through and, finally, for us to leave. We must always leave, for it is not how we enter or what we do, but how we leave the world that defines us, all too often.
Her hands look strange, flattened, all the colour taken from them as she squashes them against the walls of her bindings; frantic now, she forms the words again. Save me! Save me now! Before it's too late!
But she is already doomed; a single mis-stroke of my finger, the Windows between us close, leaving me beating in frustration on my desk; for my computer has crashed, my writing is lost and my muse, so fleeting an existence, is gone.
If only I had saved.
Her lips form the words, almost as if she mirrors my thoughts; save me. I know that if I heed her, if I give in to my instincts, the world will be a different place; mere people, those ghosts I see around me every day, would be transient, flat, two-dimensional, while she would solidify, grow, become… something.
She reaches out to me, her fingers long and languid, but then she realises that there is a barrier between us; the glass that imprisons her, that keeps her in her box; no Schrödinger's cat this one, for she is observed, and her every mood is on display; capricious, playful, flirtatious, angry or frustrated, she wears them on her as if medals on a uniformed veteran, proud and tall. I see her every action and reaction through the windows that line the glass between us.
Her hands now are pressed up against the screen; Save me! She mouths it desperately, but I can't hear; deaf to her words, I blindly continue with my work. Filling the space between us with endless writing, building a world for us to live in, for us to travel through and, finally, for us to leave. We must always leave, for it is not how we enter or what we do, but how we leave the world that defines us, all too often.
Her hands look strange, flattened, all the colour taken from them as she squashes them against the walls of her bindings; frantic now, she forms the words again. Save me! Save me now! Before it's too late!
But she is already doomed; a single mis-stroke of my finger, the Windows between us close, leaving me beating in frustration on my desk; for my computer has crashed, my writing is lost and my muse, so fleeting an existence, is gone.
If only I had saved.
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reasons for dying - one
one.
for mercy, first and foremost. how can you call me cruel when i silence my sister misery? the dead are dead alike. they cannot feel the struggles of the living. there is no body to find the pain; no nerves to sing a symphony of suffering, no hand to hold. i am a journey we make alone, like every other we make in life. just that the path swallows itself as your feet leave the ground. there is no breadcrumb trail, for the dead do not eat. there is no nightingale song to hint at the backwards road, for the dead do not sing. there is no longer
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A Way to Forget
I was seeking aimlessly
through the jars of my life.
I found them in a dream,
these great, magic urns,
one containing butter, one, milk
others filled with grains or brass or gold.
I was looking for the lids, in order to cover them up
but i could not find even one.
Sometimes, I would spill a little and
sometimes, I would return from elsewhere
to find them empty
This caused me a great deal of anxious sadness
just sitting there, looking into the empty containers
that once held my life
I woke up some time later and checked the clock
10 pm
I had not had a drink in several hours.
I needed a drink.
So,
I got up and
produced shirt
Literature
dont write under the influence
Dr. Asclepius called me;
he told me i'm bipolar
(i still say it's luxuria)
My prescription?
Fucking medicine.
Take two pills:
Doctor's Orders
(as if anyone actually
obeys those, anyway)
Take another pill.
One for each time
you looked at me,
then two more if
i had looked back.
i'll take one more for that time you
branded fake
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Who's not been in this situation before? You've done something awesome, you've touched the heavens through your writing, you can see flashes of your muse's talent and brilliance... then something crashes and you lose the lot, you're staring at a blank screen or a desktop. Urgh. And then you put it back together, but it's never quite so good.
Anyway, this was a short piece, not even long enough to be a story, for the #Inspiring-Words competition for this month, which had to be a piece of writing around the words 'Save me'.
Just a bit of fun, I suppose!
Anyway, this was a short piece, not even long enough to be a story, for the #Inspiring-Words competition for this month, which had to be a piece of writing around the words 'Save me'.
Just a bit of fun, I suppose!
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This is amazing! I love the personification you got going, and the change from an almost romance to abrupt reality, very well written! Though I wish I had your muse, I'm pretty sure mine is a stuck up teenager that only pays attention to me when there's nothing better to do